WHAT IS WRONG WITH MOTHER
poem by:
Fadrian Bartley
Written
on Jan 29, 2018
Whats Wrong With Mother? I become possess From my mother’s affliction The heart cut itself When I anticipate her struggles It horrifies me What’s wrong with mother? The battle she endure From a body which tend to fight itself War break silence at the surfaces of her skin Prolong at the edge of the hair follicle What’s wrong with mother? A few days of no pills And my eyes burn From the salt liquid flowing between my lashes Whenever i look upon her What’s wrong with mother? Her hair was remove without her consent And like vampires she is now a victim to The humid rays of the smiling sun What’s wrong with mother? Her dark cluster patches Spreading all over her body frightens me not another soul or demon, but a complex nature fighting against itself.
Tags: Sad, Depressing, Scary, Pain, Fear,
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Frank Hornby . commented on Jan 29, 2018 at 9:38am
Sad when mothers are ready to "leave"...............
Acushla Sarswat
commented on Jan 29, 2018 at 11:18am
The comparison with vampires is interesting. If the author added detail to this particular theme it would make this poem more interesting.
Fadrian Bartley
commented on Jan 30, 2018 at 4:32pm
thanks guys but the poem is strictly about LUPUS and i characterized the poem with associated symptoms
Frank Hornby .
commented on Feb 01, 2018 at 12:48pm
......cleverly done......but it fooled me....it was impossible for me to relate to the illness....my own mother died with Cancer....symptoms of the poem hit home...........good poem..
