BLOODY ATTEMP
poem by:
Fadrian Bartley
Written
on Jan 13, 2018
At the edge of ending it all I look below and saw that I will be a great fall At that very same moment I hear a voice call Offering the help I need through it all I think for a moment what it would have been If all my families no longer seen A stupid way to end all my nightmares When hope always being there to cast my cares A speck of concern have a million ways to share The first in line is to surpass your fears But how could I when the battle is lonely And friends of no heart will give aid unsurely I stood at the top of a dreadful cliff Waiting for the wind to give me a lift But it never came And the suicide attempt was put to shame A hateful voice whisper in my ears Trying to poison my mind with fears With words such as why must I live Because I have something precious to give
Tags: Sad, Depressing, Confused, Hope, Dark,
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Chris Cleverly commented on Jan 22, 2018 at 2:04am
I like this, bold and to the point without the unnecessary overuse of adjectives . nice work
Christopher Russon
commented on Jan 24, 2018 at 3:04pm
Thanks for sharing this well written poem Fadrian one that is relateable.
Fadrian Bartley
commented on Jan 24, 2018 at 3:08pm
thanks chris appreciate it
Ankit Upadhyay
commented on Jan 27, 2018 at 6:40pm
Spellbound!
Adam S
commented on Jan 27, 2018 at 8:00pm
Very inspiring and thoughtful. Nicely written.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Jun 05, 2019 at 6:10pm
Life is precious.....................your life..
