Summer Fling
poem by:
Stephen Dobson
Written
on Feb 06, 2017
Laying in my room As I stare into space Hours passing by As I'm trying to escape. Its me vs my mind, 1000 things to say, Putting my thoughts on paper, And locking them away. Life became a battle Many highs and lows. Until I danced with her. Several days ago. That moment of time, such a beautiful thing. Like written in the movies. Our summer fling. Grabbing my hand, And I follow her lead. Looking in her eyes, Heart filled with glee. That curl in her lip, The cutest thing of all With a smile so bright These things I adored. Every second with her I will cherish forever. All those little things We now share together. As I think back in time, So glad that she came. I'll hold this in my heart, Forever and ever babe. You treated me so differently Just like the real thing I will never forget this, Our summer fling.
Tags: Inspirational, Faith, Rhyme, Love, Happy, Encouraging, Hope, Deep,
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George Griffiths commented:
Very moving, your technique is unique
Arch Angel
commented:
I don't understand the 1st stanza; you're trying to escape from where?. Plus, I think you don't have to include the 1st and 2nd stanzas, because it kind if disorients the main point of the poem. But it's still good.
Christopher Russon
commented:
Lovely poem with happy memories.
Nicho Mose
commented:
That's what "flings" are for.
