Christopher Russon
commented:
Good poem
Paddy Mchale
commented:
Thanks mate you're the first to comment on any of my stuff online
Christopher Russon
commented:
Christopher Russon
commented:
Don.t worry it will all come in time
Your poem is good.
I must read more of your work.
Josh Frye
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Life consist of living on one's own.Great way to put it in the first few lines. Edit it like ten times,or twenty times ,and see what your brain comes up with, new version mabey
Paddy Mchale
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Thanks for your comments I'm not sure about editing my stuff though Do you ever do that I dont reckon I'd be happy with messing it about