No More
poem by:
Charde' Ridgeway
Written
on Mar 23, 2016
I don't think i have any more fight left in me To continue on with the continuing pain The continuing heart breaking affect left in my brain Left in my soul to remember forever Of once was the main thing that made it feel like forever That one touch of security and passion You came into my life and blinded me completely Stole my heart but lied to me daily You broke my heart into a million and one pieces After fighting with my heart and soul on the line Only to be left bleeding out from a over damage flat line I loved you with every breath in me Every thought that ran though my head reminded me of you The handsome smile , oh so perfect and white That cute laugh you make when i make you blush Or is it the way i look at you when you have no clue The way you use to make me feel is beyond crazy and wild But i guess that's what love do to you when fall so hard for someone by the mile Even though its hard to know i have to learn to live without you It still hurts to know i wasn't valuable enough to you to have you I guess that's when you finally know that you have 'NO MORE FIGHT LEFT"
Tags: sad, deep,
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Q. Ramirez commented:
Sounds like "The Day Love Found Me" story has got another part to it. Do not give up on Love, for "God is Love" not man. You are young and life has so many turns. Keep your heart pure. Good sad poem. Too sad.
Christopher Russon
commented:
Sad but a very good poem.
Charde' Ridgeway
commented:
Thanks everyone
Cecilia Crasto
commented:
It captures what someone feels when they've been hurt, unless we've been in that situation it's hard to relate.
Charde' Ridgeway
commented:
True fact
Lakiesha Cole
commented:
I can feel this poem, I remember a time in my life when I felt like this. Great poem!
Charde' Ridgeway
commented:
Thank You Ramirez!!
k river
commented on Jul 27, 2020 at 8:10am
Hi Charde',
I know it hurts a great deal right now. However as great as the love you thought you had found was. Just think GOD has someone a whole lot better for you just wait patiently and see. He is there but you both have be prepared for what GOD has planned for you. It is far greater than anything you or anyone else could possibly conceive. It will just require you to be patient and truly believe allowing GOD to be in total control of your life not just parts of it. When you can really surrender everything to HIM then, and only then will you be on your way to finding the true love you are searching for and person GOD has prepared for you.
Just think if you were in the relationship you write about then you would not have been free for the new relationship that GOD has for you. Whether you can see this now or not GOD has blessed you and kept you from making a major life mistake.Take heart GOD is there for you talk to HIM and give HIM this burden to carry for you. Hang in there, LET GOD MAKE THINGS RIGHT FOR YOU. Don't get sticky fingers and take the problem back and try to sort things out for yourself it won't work and you'll just be frustrated in the process.
The key for you is to place all your trust in GOD and leave it there. Until you do, you will find yourself kicked around battered and bruised until you finally Let go and Let GOD control things.
Best regards,
K River
