Christopher Russon
commented on Oct 16, 2024 at 11:58am
Beautifully written
Trevor Cartwright
commented on Nov 26, 2024 at 8:58am
I dig it like a trench! Great lyrics.
Leon Veneman
commented on Dec 18, 2024 at 1:22am
This is excellent, I got some rhythm with it during reading. I'm curious what kind of music you wrote this for :)
Roxanne Dubarry
commented on Oct 21, 2025 at 12:59am
Yes you must be feeling a lot of frustration and despair but obviously the object of your affection already has other distractions.