ann parks
commented:
Chloe was 6....she had a lung transplant which was unsuccesful. Writing this poem helped me with the situation....RIP Chloe
louise bridges
commented:
beautiful poem! writing really does help instead of holding it all inside!
Christopher Russon
commented:
I like this poem.Very touching.
And you are correct in saying writing helps
Sadly many hold there pain inside.
A previous user
commented:
This is heartbreaking. It steals my breath. Thank you for sharing. God bless you
Edward shields
commented:
Can feel the pain. Great poem.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Aug 14, 2021 at 12:13pm
So sad, so very sad.....and yes it is a form of therapy, putting it on paper....beautiful...