Frank Hornby .
commented on Nov 05, 2018 at 6:34pm
I love it.....
Kayleigh Blower
commented on Nov 05, 2018 at 6:46pm
Thank you
Kayleigh Blower
commented on Nov 05, 2018 at 6:46pm
Thank you
Christopher Russon
commented on Jan 05, 2019 at 8:03pm
In a word.awesome.
Absolute
commented on Oct 05, 2019 at 2:59pm
Beautiful poem. It has a deep philosophical thought rooted in it. I interpret your poem where something like maya (illusion) tries to lure us with. Not real but keeps us bounded and tied. In fact the Hindu philosophy echoes a similar school of thought. Great Job