Taha Hassan
commented on Nov 09, 2017 at 5:54pm
I feel the depression in this poem ... In this .... voice of a shattered heart. I hope you don't feel this poem as much as I do. and If you do, I hope you try and live for better things in life than sadness and regret. I can't say I love your poem ..... I can't say I hate your poem. It's just a really powerful poem .... Take care -T
Frank Hornby .
commented on Nov 10, 2017 at 12:53pm
My mother died of cancer....40yrs ago......she's not with me physically....but she is always in my mind............forever.......sad poem..stay strong Sunshine....
Valerie Russon
commented on Nov 30, 2017 at 10:36pm
I can relate to your poem as mother died 46 yrs ago with cancer and i still have moments that i think of her these thoughts and feelings never go away i still miss her as i was only 16 years old time when you need a mother.Your poem is sad but it does have feeling and painful.good.