A Ghost
poem by:
Freesa Khan
Written
on Jan 10, 2014
When I first met you it felt so right, like maybe this is what people call life. Love songs all started to make sense, like before you I was completely dense. Then slowly you began to drift away, there were so many things I wanted to say. Time was something you never had, and small things made you extremely mad. I wanted us to work, I tried my best, but every moment became a test. Now your gone, and I don't know how I feel, I'm still wondering if you were ever real.
Tags: confused,
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Daniel Voges commented:
This poem is well written, I think most of us had been through a relationship like this even the one's that hade lasted years.
greg woods
commented:
Freesa , in your poem you said love songs started to make sense, WELL, you've just written one, nice.
Janet Vick
commented:
Well written story too many go through. Take care. Janet
Milton Robertson
commented:
Heart Touching and sad but we live and learn
Edward fabela
commented:
Great poem, it's awesome.
M Losthere
commented:
Just got to this website today... was on poetfreak but I like this site a little more. Love this verse. See my postings.. I think we have a similar style..
