Cecilia Crasto
commented:
And things are not getting any better, there will always be that divide, and the poor will continue to help the rich grow richer...very good, just one small correction in the last line.
Q. Ramirez
commented:
thanks Cecilia, yes the cartels in Mexico are very powerful and corrupt the whole political system. I am aware of the "I ma here to stay", it was intentional as a play on words, I do that a lot. Thanks again, I might have to change it if it is too confusing.
Christopher Russon
commented:
Lovely worded poem.I am getting on in in years now but Mexico is a country that I wish I had visited in my younger days.I feel corruption is everywhere.
Theresa Taylor
commented on Jan 08, 2018 at 4:37am
Powerful