Annie Kirby
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What is it you see, every time you look straight through me? We try so hard to be someone to somebody that we lose ourselves and in the end it was for nothing. Wonderful poem!
commented:
Great poem and i agree with Annie's comment as well. We do try hard to fit into other people's acceptance, and as difficult as it is, others will disappoint 100% of the time. Self acceptance is the ticket to freedom and happiness. Believe in yourself, and the right people will join you in your life in due time.
Christopher Russon
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I used to act in a way that made me acceptable by other people.
Now I think take me or leave me.Very good poem.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Sep 06, 2018 at 8:29am
Yeah I agree with Chris.....just be true to yourself, and honest to others.....and decent people will be attracted to you........really good poem