Micah Griffie
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I like your poem!
Christopher Russon
commented:
Well written poem.
Children are a worry.
They go through a rebellious stage but come through it in most cases.
Fauxcroft wade
commented:
Powerful and full of meaning. Wonderful
PAUL D
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EXCELLENT POEM THANK-YOU FOR SHARING
Geoffrey Brewer
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Striking title and powerful use of words.
Cecilia Crasto
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Much appreciate all your constructive comments.
Martyn Grindrod
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Your work is inspiring
Maria Williams
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Sad times we live in now, making parents doubt their parenting skills. I love your style of writing, very inspiring.
Frank Hornby .
commented:
Powerful poem Cecilia.....teenagers today are surrounded with temptations...it must be so hard to say no to the devil.....
Cecilia Crasto
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Thanks Frank,I think a generation has been stolen and I fear for their future.