Rene Hernandez
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Sad but realistic...thank you for sharing these honest words.
louise bridges
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this site is good for showing our feelings of the world and ourselves and everyone in it. thankyou for sharing!
Elizabeth Ladji
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Love yourself. Self is all we can really have faith in. This is a beautiful poem.
Elizabeth Ladji
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Love yourself. Self is all we can really have faith in. This is a beautiful poem.
Q. Ramirez
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Jesus loves you, and I abide by his word and commandment; You are my neighbor.
john steele
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well I begin on saying I been there and felt that it will take time to get threw that trust me when I say you will find your love he is not as far as you think from above try a little less hard in looking for him trust me when I say he will find you far from that bridge I once was there and lost and lonely when I finnaly ran into the love to drown out the lonely it took me 22 years and I finnaly found it trust me when I say it was easy full of heart break full of painful ackes it will get easier as the days slowly take great poem I am here if you need an ear
Tajrae pinn.
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Wow poem is deep
Tony Anderson
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Great write
Shanta
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Regrettably, I have been there too, until we can overcome ego's blindness (looking out there where nothing to be found!) life is a struggle, learn to look beyond social conditioning; know thyself!
Fauxcroft wade
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Beautiful and a well sculptured piece of work
Christopher Russon
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There are so many lonely people in this world young and elderly alike.
Lovely heartfelt poem.