pat hoban
commented:
gives a reason find ones piece of mind with them wishful thoughts all are safe and to me i wish i had children.
Timothy Nelson
commented:
Love it! I can see all of the descriptions, the children tripping over their shoes and toys , you constantly having to say "Boys, stop running" Great poem. Would love to bookmark but I don't see on this site where it lets you do it. Again, I love this poem. "Clarksdalepoet"
Geoffrey Brewer
commented:
Nice simple poem arousing an understanding and empathy for the life of another. Forgive me for donning my English teacher hat, but please sort out the difference between: 'there' 'their' and 'they're'.