Cecilia Crasto
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Well written poem, deep emotions, bittersweet.
Christopher Russon
commented:
Really nice poem with feeling.
Annie Kirby
commented:
Beautifully sad, so much emotion and pain. Powerful write!
Wendy Phelan
commented:
An expressive poem, I enjoyed it very much, honest
Robert Kohlhammer
commented:
I like the way the words almost echo each other, or reverberate in harmony.
Chris Cleverly
commented:
some good lyrics there for verses and maybe a bridge
Ja Ja
commented:
Expressive emotions put to ink
Very well written I think
Thank you
Tara Marie
commented:
Deep
K Alexander
commented:
Very deep and lovely